Sunday 21 March 2010

Feeback from a graphic designer (Ranjit Sihat)

Front Cover
  • The line in between the date and price needs to be central
  • The central image of Taylor Lautner needs to be moved over a few mms in order for the "Who's Afraid" to be shown properly
  • The writing at the bottom of the cover needs to be central compared to the hearts on the page
  • The word "Teen" shouldn't be overlapped with the word "Simply"
  • The white border on the magazine front cover needs to be equal

Advertisement

  • The opacity of the image needs to be reduced
  • The white line surrounding the central image needs to be taken off

Contents

  • The word "February" shouldn't overlap the word "Contents"
  • The "O" in "On the Cover" needs to be in line with the word "Contents"
  • The alignment on the right hand side needs to be changed - for example, the number "27" is too close to the picture of Besard and Ardit
  • The spacing in the contents box needs to be equal - for example, the gap between "Fashion" and "33" needs to be the same as the others
  • The writing following page "33" on the brainstorm is unfinished

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